Awesome story! Your use of reluctance is great in a lot of your stories, but I think you do it perfectly in these. I hope there's more in the works... or a sequel to Piper and the College Boys.
The Allie trilogy was nut bustingly awesome. And I fucking loved the ending! It made my dick throb every time her dad called her Allie-gator.
So far may favorites are: 1. Allie 2. What they did to my daughter 3. Piper and the College Boys
I thought you might have been inspired by the events in Ohio but looks like you beat them to it by a year. I wonder if that girl's dad whacks it thinking about his dumb drunk slut of a daughter getting raped by those football players. I bet he thinks she got exactly what she deserved!
Please write some more stuff, I really like your character development. I love how hot Piper was just to get attention and how Allie felt so compelled by her inner slut; Becky was a dumb slut, just like her mom :P
Don't know if ur still there. Read What they did to my daughter. Not erotic, more cerebral. You are a good writer, and should continue devoting your time to writing. The story was a somewhat believable account, and helped delve into the conflict. More clinical than sexual which suggests that you would excel at writing stories centered around character studies, and just let the stories take you wherever they take you. You seem to be good at analyzing a person's psyche, without sounding like a doctor or professor. Maybe a full story about a sexual deviant who starts off young spying on his mother or sister, or from a girl's perspective spying on her parents or older sister or brother having sex, and progresses from there. I think you could come up with a real hit, since you don't shy away from the taboo details, and could give a very graphic, intriguing yet chilling account of someone's descent into the depths of depravity (sorry for the alliteration! lol). Looking forward to seeing your name in the bookstore!
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i dug it - keep going...
want more shower
Great stuff! I can't wait to read Chapter 3...
Awesome story! Your use of reluctance is great in a lot of your stories, but I think you do it perfectly in these. I hope there's more in the works... or a sequel to Piper and the College Boys.
Please Santa I've been a good boy.
The Allie trilogy was nut bustingly awesome. And I fucking loved the ending! It made my dick throb every time her dad called her Allie-gator.
So far may favorites are:
1. Allie
2. What they did to my daughter
3. Piper and the College Boys
I thought you might have been inspired by the events in Ohio but looks like you beat them to it by a year. I wonder if that girl's dad whacks it thinking about his dumb drunk slut of a daughter getting raped by those football players. I bet he thinks she got exactly what she deserved!
Please write some more stuff, I really like your character development. I love how hot Piper was just to get attention and how Allie felt so compelled by her inner slut; Becky was a dumb slut, just like her mom :P
Sorry, meant to say, Becky was just a stupid cunt, just like her dead mom :P
I liked it and looking for more, great work
Don't know if ur still there. Read What they did to my daughter. Not erotic, more cerebral. You are a good writer, and should continue devoting your time to writing. The story was a somewhat believable account, and helped delve into the conflict. More clinical than sexual which suggests that you would excel at writing stories centered around character studies, and just let the stories take you wherever they take you. You seem to be good at analyzing a person's psyche, without sounding like a doctor or professor. Maybe a full story about a sexual deviant who starts off young spying on his mother or sister, or from a girl's perspective spying on her parents or older sister or brother having sex, and progresses from there. I think you could come up with a real hit, since you don't shy away from the taboo details, and could give a very graphic, intriguing yet chilling account of someone's descent into the depths of depravity (sorry for the alliteration! lol). Looking forward to seeing your name in the bookstore!
loved it. great length. a hint of suspense at more to come. plus the dominance is not over the top
When is he going to let Allie have it where she really wants it?
Love it when does her rothers dad and uncle get some teen pussy!
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