Dec 10, 2010
I was 11 the first time a boy touched me between my legs. It wasn't an especially romantic episode. We were in a living room with three other pairs of overly hormonal preteens, and my friend's mother was making dinner in the next room. The fingering was awkward and fast, and we both stayed fully clothed. Still, I don't think my heart ever beat faster than it did the moment I felt his fingers beneath the waist band of my panties.
What many writers don't get, is that there's more to eroticism than sex. The build up to sex--those thrilling moments when your brain just repeats "oh my god oh my god oh my god" over and over again because you can't believe these things are actually happening--are so much more important than the act itself. Of course, those moments can't be conveyed in fiction with the ease of finding another clever way to phrase "the penis slipped into the vagina." It takes real talent.
Wife Seducer's Morganrunner14 series is one that did it right.
The story follows 14 year old Morgan Healy, a pretty blonde, living with her single mom in a typical suburban setting. She's a very normal girl who likes soccer, track, hanging out with her friends, and other typical 14 year old things. When she lets a pervy widower next door believe he's clandestinely watching her through her webcam, it excites her. After he lets annymous strangers in a chat room in on his secret spy cam, she gets very excited.
Things progress slowly in this story, but that's not a criticism. Whole chapters have slipped away before it even dawns on you that there hasn't been any actual sex. As naive, nervous Morgan tests her own limits, constantly terrified that she's pushed things too far, we get a sense of the palpable tension on both sides of the webcam. You can feel her adrenaline when she finally shows them her body, and you can feel their testosterone as they take it in.
The story is a bit dated at this point, because it relies heavily on chat programs that have become obsolete. I wasn't much older than Morgan when I first read this. By now, I imagine the budding exhibitionist has gone off to college and found new ways to tease and please the boys. I think that because I feel like she's somehow real, which is rare in these sorts of stories.
(Also, Wife Seducer seems to have updated his webpage recently enough that Asstr highlighted it in their author listing. When you're done loving this story, I highly encourage you all to drop him a line and demand a sequel!)
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UPDATE: Sigh. I'm sorry, Internet, for daring to post a picture of a fully clothed young lady. I thought it was a cute picture, kind of fit the review. Apparently, I was wrong. My bad. Here's penance.
What many writers don't get, is that there's more to eroticism than sex. The build up to sex--those thrilling moments when your brain just repeats "oh my god oh my god oh my god" over and over again because you can't believe these things are actually happening--are so much more important than the act itself. Of course, those moments can't be conveyed in fiction with the ease of finding another clever way to phrase "the penis slipped into the vagina." It takes real talent.Wife Seducer's Morganrunner14 series is one that did it right.
The story follows 14 year old Morgan Healy, a pretty blonde, living with her single mom in a typical suburban setting. She's a very normal girl who likes soccer, track, hanging out with her friends, and other typical 14 year old things. When she lets a pervy widower next door believe he's clandestinely watching her through her webcam, it excites her. After he lets annymous strangers in a chat room in on his secret spy cam, she gets very excited.
Things progress slowly in this story, but that's not a criticism. Whole chapters have slipped away before it even dawns on you that there hasn't been any actual sex. As naive, nervous Morgan tests her own limits, constantly terrified that she's pushed things too far, we get a sense of the palpable tension on both sides of the webcam. You can feel her adrenaline when she finally shows them her body, and you can feel their testosterone as they take it in.
The story is a bit dated at this point, because it relies heavily on chat programs that have become obsolete. I wasn't much older than Morgan when I first read this. By now, I imagine the budding exhibitionist has gone off to college and found new ways to tease and please the boys. I think that because I feel like she's somehow real, which is rare in these sorts of stories.
(Also, Wife Seducer seems to have updated his webpage recently enough that Asstr highlighted it in their author listing. When you're done loving this story, I highly encourage you all to drop him a line and demand a sequel!)
_________
UPDATE: Sigh. I'm sorry, Internet, for daring to post a picture of a fully clothed young lady. I thought it was a cute picture, kind of fit the review. Apparently, I was wrong. My bad. Here's penance.
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6 comments:
First picture is hotter. Something is going to happen, it suggests action. Second picture is a naked girl.
Always been a fan of this story, you nailed it on your head with your review of it. Still wonder to this day who the model for Morgan is in the pictures he used to heigthen the stories feel.
I absolutely loved the stories and was soaking wet from just half way through the first!! Well Done to the author....Mwwahhh Sj xx
My favorite online erotica story by far, the Morganrunner14 series has stayed with me since I read it some 5 years ago. My favorite aspect of it is how easily it could happen. Sneaking into a young girl's house to roofie her - you know that's possible. The offering of money and gifts in exchange for glimpses of boobs/taking of virginity has also likely happened more than a few times in our "sexy youth"-worshipping culture. I wish there were more stories like this out there; I have pretty much given up reading online erotica. Men seem incapable of grasping the cerebral aspects of sexuality just as much as women fail at capturing the gory, fascinating imagery of the sex act itself. And even when one or the other does understand both sides of it, the imagination required to create compelling literature requires a skill set that only a fraction of people possess. Odds are high that almost every single person capable of writing high-level erotica is either busy with something more important or isn't interested in doing so. Wife Seducer is like a critically endangered species, except even more precious since we can't guarantee his offspring will anything like him. And then there's the small matter of how difficult and illegal it would be to put him in an enclosure and find females for him to inseminate. To summarize, I agree with you - your review was right on. And for the record, I prefer the clothed picture.
I can't help the urge to grip my banana in fist, for a bit of rapid-movement-repeat. While my other head imagines what type of stories get her pussy wet the quickest. My head that's gripped in my fist, directs head on shoulders to begin searching for these well written fuck stories. And to hurry the hell up.
My other hand grabs the mouse and starts to click-ity-click through the site, looking for the Morganrunner series...
Do I find these hot stories quickly enough to have a happy Banana, then have a good read?
stay tuned...
I’ve cum many times to this series
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